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Confession is an obsession I have to remove
the thoughts I keep in my possession.
The profession of my conscience leaves my soul with a clear perception,
with exception of one reflection.
A preconception that I will be open to others
For close inspection and judgments uncovered,
by all of those who have destructive druthers.
But as I create a fate of restraints upon my existence
A persistence of distaste dominates my reluctance
To believe I’ll be received with truth and acceptance,
And so conviction and addiction fulfill me with repentance.


So as I learn to let go of the façade that I show
In the depths of my soul is where you will go
That is my true confession



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The following comments are for "I Have No Wall"
by MeghanC

the wall

Interesting and neat choice of words ending in "tion", and "sion”. However, they do their job and give away your message well.


macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 5, 2005 )

walls
I have to agree with macbeth and say "interesting". Sometimes the rhyming words work well but other places the flow is not so good. Again though, you have weilded them well enough for the essence to get through. It is sometimes as hard keeping the walls down as it is breaking through them in the first place.
cheers
smithy

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: May 6, 2005 )





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