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Stop the yelling,
All the hateful words.
For the past few months,
It's all I've heard.
Ya'll were so happy,
For the past fifteen years.
A file for divorce,
Is my worst fear.
Two houses, two mothers,
Two fathers and teddybears.
Is all just a haunting nightmare.
What about your son?
My dear sweet brother-
What do you think you're teaching him?
Only to hate one another.
I'm sick of this feeling,
of being locked a celler.
The only thing I see is,
Your own desperate failure.

Rhei Ropel

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