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I like this, us, you and I together
Our hearts uplifted, light as a feather
You always know how to comfort my soul
Our worlds united into an unseperable whole
Baby, with all of my heart, I truly do love you
My love is so strong, you haven't the slightest clue
Please be honest, and faithful in every way
Life without you would seem a dark shade of gray
Don't leave, let's stay like this forever
Us falling apart should happen never
We can lay in the mountains, stare at the stars
It's us, always, together by far
Together we'll face the world's greatest battles
Even a snake's silly old rattle
Take my hand
And try to understand
That deep in my heart
We should never be apart

------
Rhei Ropel


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