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cloudy sky
starless
moonless
dark

cold wind whips
upon the leaves
an eerie
chilling rustle

deep inside
it comforts me
the bitter night is apt

again on my soul
i could never cry
tears that flow inside

faded smiles
faded laughter
nothing more
they're gone

emptiness
i find i am cold
yet what else
could i have done

memories will ever be so sweet
but in the end
we lost
we died

and so again
i find the end
i find myself
alone

goodbye

dear ones goodbye
i turn around
move on

mourning the death
of friendships
once held dear


------
~A~
For my eternal muse... We are of one heart... Forever



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by maimai

desolate

Wow this sounds so desolate, it's right up my alley, I like the moon image.

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )





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