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I am Naked
To th eworld
In my mind
Bare to my peers
I am Naked
In the noon-time sun
Naked face-to-face
Nekkid to the bodies ebbing and flowing on the street
I am Naked
To the lockerroom mirror
To the size 2 A&F jeans
Naked to SlimFast and Metabolife
I am Naked
To my best friend's giggle
Naked to the F on my math test
Nake dfor all to see
I am Naked
So Stop!
Don't Look!
'Cause underneath everything
I am Naked

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Purr like a kitten; Scratch like a bitch


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by snuffystuff

Exposed
I like this poem because it makes me feel so exposed to everything. Kind of like the effect it has when someone tells you how many germs are on a doorhandle. You don't realize it until it's pointed out. :D

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )





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