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I'm drowning in his tainted mortar
Struggling under gasping water
Swallowed by this toxic space
That rotting smile upon his face
His sickly touch just burns right through
Here comes my bitter "I hate you"
This shame leaks from every pore
Sorry I'm still craving more

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