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F.A.T.H.E.R.
by josey (Member) - published: June 28, 2002
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Category - Poetry
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Fantsy man,
Able to leap tall buildings.
Treasured in my heart.
Has no equal,
Even though he's human.
Ready to slay dragons!


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Great acrostic, and right on theme. Love the mention of dragons, indeed, fantasy man. There is a high bounancy in this.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: July 6, 2002 )





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