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Then tease some more.

Or fully clothed,
Your eyes follow me.

You still ache for me.

You’re a breast man
And I am, Miss Nipples
So here’s a treat
They’re yours.

or candy coated
still turns you on.

I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Still turns you on"
by nae411

NAE!!! Everyone read this!!!
Sorry hun, had to call attention to this...taut little poem. I know you like to keep abreast of things Nae, so with some help from your readers I am sure they will keep you well formed.

Oh..sorry well INformed of how delightful this is..(chuckling)!!

This sure is a great little treasure Chest!

I am out of here, before you clobber me LOL...

I like how you wrote this Nae. Jokes aside, it is jovial, sensual.....

Dar ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 29, 2005 )

Not only sensual
Not only sensual, it is fantastic. Now I have to read every thing you wrote. weirdwriter

( Posted by: weirdwriter [Member] On: May 3, 2005 )

Turning him on is fun!
Dar, thank you, I cracked when I read your subject line. You are too funny. This was a silly right, it amazes me that after 20 years he still acts like he is seeing them for the first time!

weirdwriter, thank you so much for stopping by, your comment made me smile all day.

Oh Lilia, of course I am bad, wouldn't be me if I wasn't ;0).


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )

Man was tempted with an 'apple',
By his woman long ago.
Eve begat man's life long struggle,
Seeking beds his seeds to sow. .

Nae; Lit Org's poetic temptress,
Used a 'pear' to lead her man.
Delicioust fruit borne just by women,
Still pervert the will of man.

Candy coated, wet, hard nipples,
What chance has man to stay away?
Naked, Braless, mankind heaven,
Ensures Eve's game is here to stay.

Blushes, Giggles, Winks and Teases
Perfected now in every line,.
Keeps the fellas drooling after,
Our Naes poetry every time.

Have Fun!


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )

Me Temptress????
Can't believe I want to be a writer: Typos: Meant to write:
Dar, thank you, I cracked up when I read your subject line. You are too funny. This was a silly write, it amazes me that after 20 years he still acts like he is seeing them for the first time!

Ivor, mister you make me chuckle every time. I am not a temptress, well maybe, but only a little. Loved your poem Ivor.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 4, 2005 )

Going places
Hi, Since were so kind to comment I thought I would see what is going on in your mind. Uh ok!
Just kidding. I like the way you travel through realms. Not just in one direction, and searching to stir emotion of all types. Isn't this fun.
Just my opinion.

( Posted by: fasthinker [Member] On: May 16, 2005 )

Calling Nae home!!!
Ok girl, you must be hiding a stash from us...I am waiting for you to post a May poem....notice the date of your last post here???
Ok, here is Dar, tapping fingers on desk, waiting.

As Lilia so well puts it HEE HEE HEE.

I saw you in the wake thread....

Darlene ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: May 19, 2005 )

Don't want to be banned Dar!
Hey there Dareva, you are too funny. If I post what I have been writing lately they will ban me from the site, lol. I have been very naughty lately, ahem, so uncharacteristic of me... But I will work on a watered down version. Thank you for missing me. Love you girl!

Fairplay, I love reading your comments, thank you. And I love, love, love what you wrote about my shouting at the wake!!! See you there, or Not yikes!

Fasthinker, thank you for stopping by. I hope you are enjoying this site. I don't always write like this, lol.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 19, 2005 )

Nae the temptress
hehe! I am glad I found this one. You have been a very bad gurl here, Miss Nipples! :)

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )

Bad girl????? No way...
Me a bad girl, come on Peter you know better, lol. Yeah so I am, oh well... Thanks for reading.


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 23, 2005 )

Got a rise out of me
Though a leg-man through and through,
I have often set my sights
on a lovely mountain view
topped by rosy, crinkled heights.

What is glader than dawn's light,
spreading over satin sheets,
teased and tickled in mock flight,
as they reveal a blush of beet

red heat? The flush of fire
that rises through the morning cold.
What else do these peaks desire?
But a firm, wet, dewey hold.

Morning paradox; now hills rise
to meet a warm, moist hungry sigh.

( Posted by: andyhavens [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

Andy Haven is naughty too...
Andy, I so loved your words here. Thank you for stopping by, I reworked "Crossing the Line" per your suggestion and posted it as "Road Map" if you get a moment let me know what you think. Thank you!

( I hear you about the legs but we have to work with what we got, lol.)
Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

Nae's Peaking
Nae- The budding subject of this pointed piece has been nicely nipped.

How about streaming video to accompany spoken words!..Don't know what gave me that idea?...


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

Bobby's video
In the subject line I typed "Boobie" twice, LOL. Ok, now that I am back to typing what I should instead of what I am thinking, I'll say the accompaning video could be a little much, don't you think?????

You crack me up!

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

And the best Lit video, 2005, goes to...
...The awards dinner would be LIVE on SNN, the Senryu News Network.


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 27, 2005 )

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