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My vision demands attrition
Hence Grunge rock dissertation
When the mosh pit begins to breathe
i, colonial disappear

In this dance of abiogenesis
My color fades in the music

Jumping, I am without a face
Yet warrior among warriors am born
Nodding in this multitude of multitudes
i, colonial scream freedom as should

When the pounding beats proceed
My story validates itself in the song

The proposition is hypostatized in rhythm
The i sees other's rage as I
Till guitars and drums deconstruct
I, the Warrior metamorphize

When finally the concert concludes with silence
There, the prelude to my emergence

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The following comments are for "The colonial's Overture"
by webguy

Rather deep we go here, webguy. A pleasing, if somewhat confusing read. I think this might lend itself to lyrics. Seems to have a poetic need for fitting something other than just poetry.
-one of my favorite lines 'my vision demands attrititon'


( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )

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