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Time found me bathed in light, yet now eclipsed
By fates predestined plight as sealed in scripts
Of old and distinct archaic design;
Loosening my clutch on the spine of time.

So will the mind and the body divide:
Destroyed the unity held once inside
And so the outcast heart shall surely cry
Held only by denial’s soothing lie.

Cradled in the arms of sorrow’s disdain
And in a wake of tears I shall remain
Alone, broken, and shattered of spirit
To bend this light and for our time to split.

I have become twice a prism of doubt
A nihilistic stream of god-sent drought.
Archangelic lament to shake the world
Abandoned to anonymity’s fold.

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-A/R


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The following comments are for "Lamentations"
by Aureoverinicus

lamentations
This is very pretty to read but I think that it's depressing. Surely, you must know that God never turns his back on those who seek him out. You must trust in the Lord Jesus to help you find your path back to the light.

( Posted by: Agape [Member] On: May 2, 2005 )





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