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Japanese maple
laughs as cherry blossoms fly
away in the wind.


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The following comments are for "Jealousy"
by williamhill

Helicopters
WH,

This is lovely. But if I were a maple, I'd have bragging rights because I had 'helicopters'!

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: April 27, 2005 )

tree feud?
Hey, is the Japanese maple laughing cuz he's feuding with the cherry tree, and he's happy (in a malicious way) that the cherry tree is losing blossoms? yeah...it's a super cool haiku.

Michael

( Posted by: quill [Member] On: April 27, 2005 )

Authentic
Williamhill;
I enjoyed this read very much...A great image of a beautiful colorful tree indeed...Cherry Blosoms are very beautiful also...just like paradise!

Williamhill, the title fits perfect..because nature has to recognize God's work too. and yes, I truly believe, things such as trees, flowers,etc...gets jealous of one another.( Just to think, that even the wind obeyed Jesus voice}
an execellent write! Thanks, I even copied this, so other's could read it.

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 29, 2005 )

Spring's beauty
is all flash and glitter... Everything with meaning comes in the fall. Nice work.
-Casey

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: April 30, 2005 )

Jealousy
Thanks to you all for reading this. I am glad you enjoyed.
williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: May 1, 2005 )

WH&jealousy...
good one, my southern neighbor friend...I better
leave it there...till later...

smilin' eye's...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: May 1, 2005 )





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