I don't see it as being too far to the right. It may be one space off, but it's possible that it's just the way the font rests on the page. To edit the piece (in case you have a space in front of the 'r') you click on "manage writings" and edit the piece. You have a choice to either delete or edit. I'm not sure, but you may have to re-enter the queue. That bit is an admin question...
Personally, I did not notice! Look forward to more from you.
Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: April 26, 2005
thanks again. I noticed that all the other postings were spaced that way. I thought I'd screwed up. Guess I didn't after all. :)
This has the making of a fantastic Haiku with the editing of words that are not descriptive because the critique of Haikus' limited syllable count disciplines the creator not to use prepostions if they can avoid it...for example the words "of" and "the"...if somehow they could be replaced with more imagery words it would improve on this already beautifully written Haiku. And I hope you truly expected honest constructive critique as I do with my works...so we can master are passion... poetry writing.
Posted by: ladyngold [Member] On: May 29, 2005
Beautiful, peaceful image, Michael. I love this one. :-)