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Feel like Iím sliding right out of my mind
I wanted to move on, I had to lose who I was before
To build a new life, I had to leave myself behind
Am I the same man that I was and does it matter anymore?

Moving up and moving on seems so hard to do
It seems I build myself up to tear myself down
And yesterdayís gone now, but thatís all right with me

More clichťs written in an old notebook
And Iím not mad, at least not like before
I change my world, but it donít change the way I look
Am I only happy Ďcause I smile and does it matter anymore?

Moving up and moving on seems so hard to do
It seems I build myself up to tear myself down
And yesterdayís gone now, but thatís all right with me

I built a life that I can truly call mine
Now Iíve found someone I truly adore
And the landing may be hell, but the falling sure is fine
And all the years past, they donít matter anymore

Moving up and moving on donít seem so hard to do
You build me up, and Iím not coming down
Giving up and giving in are things I just couldnít do
You build me up, now Iím not coming down
And yesterdayís gone now, but thatís all right with me

April 26, 2005
Slide away to beautiful days gone
For Life




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The following comments are for "A Week in April"
by E.G. Evans

Ooooh.
I think it's well written. Good job! ;)

- coma

( Posted by: coma [Member] On: May 18, 2005 )





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