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A Tease that Broke a Heart

It's winter outside
And there's a numbness in my ears
But it isn't coming from the snow
It's coming from your voice

Standing under the falls
My eyes are glazing over
But the water isn't whats frosting them
It's your beauty

Wearing your favorite Kashmir jacket
Warming my freezing body
But it isn't the jacket that keeps me warm
It's your touch

Drinking old French wine
The taste is teasing my senses
But it isn't the wine that gives me this great feeling
It's your kiss

Hugging a person oh so sweet
My heart can't keep up the pace
But it isn't the hug that makes me cry
It's you

Alex, The boy full of ideas

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