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Does he really love me?
Might we have a chance?
My heart beat starts its ticking,
My feet, they start to dance.

I get these butterflies,
Burried deep inside.
Does he really love me?
Will he always hide?

He thinks he is so macho,
He's good with all the girls.
He always knows just what to say,
as he plays with my little curls.

I want to know his thoughts,
I want to see his heart.
I want to read deep in his mind,
But just where should I start?

I want him to know I love him,
and believe he truly loves me.
Does he truly love me?
Then why won't he tell me.

Does he truly love me,
Or is it simply talk.
Is he just a man charmer,
Or can he also walk the walk?

------
Mona Lisa


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The following comments are for "Does He Really Love Me?"
by cutiepieus2024

LLLLOOOOVVVVEEEE
U are a good writer straight from the heart is what i like n u just delivered the best scenario of a human being in love ..............U ROCK!!!! Well DONE!!

( Posted by: RightingIt [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )

no
No, he doesn't love you. Guys are walking cocks. He wants sex. He is a pure man whore. He will eat your emotions and spew them out on top of you. You will hurt so badly because he's nearly impossible to resist as all the charmers are. No matter how much you loathe him, you will at the same time love him. His feelings for you will never be genuine, or selely for you. There will always be a bigger challenge. People are his toys, more of a strategic game I suppose. Let's say parchessi. He plays people like he would play
parchessi.Good writing though. I'm just a negative idiot.

( Posted by: kitkatbarss [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )

Hell No

If you even have to ask, that's a red flag.

He sounds like he's more in love with himself.

And totally not into you.

You can't make someone love you.

Good luck,

macbeth

( Posted by: macbeth [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )

mona lisa Smile...
girlfriend, he'll talk the talk, but, sounds like he'll never walk the walk...I'll interject,
you're learning, tough lessons...alway's remember...that which does'nt kill you, makes you stronger, everytime.

an educated older chick, and life's good babydoll...

just Robin...

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )





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