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Seven shots in the night
cut him down in a fire fight
They say he knew thier name
did they look him in the face
How do I know the truth in the claims
Oh Im still awake in the dead of night

Im doing quite alright
theyre all falling to the wayside
Should I feel guilty
to be living so healthy
I try to reconcile being alive
Shouldnt I be in that growing line
When will the horn sound my time to die

Seven shots in the night
Never will know a why
though answers wont make it right

Troubling thoughts, soothing actions
neither will bring back the sun
Its over the mountain I left it all behind
did I do what's right
troubling thoughts aching my mind

Troubling thoughts, soothing actions
neither will bring back the sun
How do I know the truth in the claims
Oh Im still awake in the dead of night


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