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The stench of bitchery engulfs us…yes, this nation, through our blatant arrogance, have welcomed the evil that stands to undo us and we have the nerve to stand before the rest of the world as some kind of savior, when we ourselves, no longer possess the ability to slay the monsters we created or shall I say, the monsters we have become!

In this moment, we live in a place that supports racism, starve the ill, engage in wars with countries that are 47% Children, turn our backs to the homeless, fold our arms, instead of reaching out to millions of dying Africans, shut our eyes, when they hit the switch to execute the innocent, while extending the first amendment right of free speech to, Known Killer Klan &
Nasty Ass Molesters Brutalizing Lonely Adolescence…Yet we remained so conditioned, we see no wrong or is it that, we choose to live in denial.

We through our might, behind frivolous causes and bend ourselves around incorrect views, we think more of animal rights than human rights, we pay street sweepers more than teachers, sanitation workers more than soldiers, then spend billions of dollars creating visual fantasies to alter our perception of reality. Though we sometimes choke, on the sludge that strangles the light from us, we feed for 365 days until the lines between their fantasies and our reality are blurred. Now, within our own psyche, reasonable doubt has been raised, so we turn to the infamous street pharmist for a cure, you know, those young man-made millionaires who have very successful practices nationwide that service the uninsured! The pharmaceutical companies soon lighten the caseload of the street pharmist by taking mind-altering narcotics, calling them Vicodin, Oxycontin and norcolortab, making these illegal drugs available by subscription, as painkillers…Thanks FDA, now we have a rapid widespread addiction epidemic!

We are the problem, that allowed morality to flee and sadistic corruption to take root, and speaking of roots, let us learn a valuable lesson from the Tree, a tree can live and grow, even if some of the limbs are damaged, it can reroute the nutrients to the thriving branches if the tree trunk is damaged, it is only when the roots are corrupted that the entire tree dies…Oh it won’t fall right away, all the creatures of that environment will hibernate and suckle, until there’s nothing left but a hollow shell, that in time will cease to exist and no amount of rain or sun will bring it back.

We hide behind the cloak of religion, in which we really don’t believe, really, how could we truly believe, when we live to deceive, when the simple words, help me translates into help yourself to me…Oh we won’t fall right away, the rest of the world will come and remove everything left of value until there’s nothing left but barren land, that in time, will be claimed by another country and no amount of blatant bitchery will bring us back!.

Gaynell Kendrick


The following comments are for "Bitchery"
by oracleone

There's a lot of delicious anger and rage in here that could constitute a fine rant. The problem is the writing. The rant is difficult to follwo because of near-constant errors fo grammar, spelling, and diction. Some of the sentences are nearly impossible to read because of commas that seem to have been placed randomly.

I don't see what you mean by "bitchery" either, but that doesn't bother me!

I'd love to read a cleaned-up and edited versiuon of this. How about it?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )

not to disrespect, by no means...good rant and much I will go agree with,although I believe in some of this different...actually, I get your point...
my puctuation and english 101 has greatly improved since my induction late last year, I
appreciate your view and request you to continue to write...
respectfully, Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 27, 2005 )

Phenomenal rant in my opinion - we need to address
many a civil liberty in this country and take some long looks in the mirror (myself included) as we realistically do what we can to press for reform in these issues. Big Pharma Corps seem all but sociopathic these days in regard to the treatment of their 'prescribers.' Education needs to be another priority at cheaper cost to all (Though I'm biased on this point as a soon-to-be-education major) This rant's got fire to it
-would write more but my comp session time's almost up. Keep writing!

( Posted by: Tigerlily [Member] On: April 27, 2005 )

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