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Your passion started a fire
and now this buildings cinders
they all say you're too mad
to be of any use to anyone
but what theyre missing is
You're the last true beleiver

Theyre listening like a fender bender
You talk like a car crash
Its always been hard and you want it to pass
but passing lanes never gets you far, just ahead
Too far ahead you'll just find yourself dead

the last true beleiver
They'll make you feel small
they'll make you feel weak
they have to or they'll lose
too bad no one mentioned
life isnt a contest

They see someone misunderstood
You see theyre just not understanding
Its not use fighting you'll just end up like them

its a tough life for a true beleiver
Love isnt an option
Pride seems to be in short supply
and humility is just a disguise

One day they'll say
there goes the last true beleiver
Sure they'll make you feel small
Sure they'll make you feel weak
they have to or they'll lose
too bad no one mentioned
life isnt a contest
But you wont convince them of this


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The following comments are for "Last True Beleiver"
by David_loren

True Believer
This is a really good piece, with just one flaw: spelling and grammar needs a little polishing.
Don't mean to sound bossy, but remember the 'rule' "I before E, except after C"? You need to apply it here...

Other than that, it's good. The idea is one that could possibly be developed into a longer piece, maybe a short.

--Jasmine

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: July 1, 2002 )





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