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From a distance
perspective is clear;
maybe not valued
possibly insincere.

Miniscule details
are easily missed
simply written off
to such as this.

From a distance
a summary is drawn,
cold and calculated
and so often wrong.

I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.


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The following comments are for "From A Distance"
by Char

From A Distance
First I must say I like your new avatar. Also your poem is just as Tina ( aka; Ginger,LOL ) said it is and I would love to see more. Sorry Tina but, in my mind's eye your name is typecast.

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: April 25, 2005 )

Char, another piece of brevity
This is an excellent piece. You know I admire your work and your voice of brevity.
Yes, it is a nice avatar, I agree.
What more can I say?..... .It is NICE to see you here, I know how busy you have been.
Darlene ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 28, 2005 )

Congratulations Char!!!!
On your writing and I noticed this in your biography........Let me be the first to congratulate you here in Lit.

"I recently completed a project in cotranslation of an eighteenth century piece into modern terminology, which will be published in the near future."

How great that must feel!!

Love and respect,
Darlene xo

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: June 14, 2005 )

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