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The Paradox of Echoes

Author's Note: This is the fight I do not wish to have.

'Yes' deserves to be said
in echoes and 'No', best abrupt.
When I scream you name, however,
nothing ever comes back.

Denial painfully wails in my ears.
No, No, No, is all I feel.
But the silence after
is more suffocating -

There, 'Yes' never sleeps.

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The following comments are for "After the Fight #6:"
by webguy

oh yes!
Oh i didn't see that hahaha... ok i'l revise it and repost! Thanks a lot demeter! :D

( Posted by: webguy [Member] On: April 26, 2005 )

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