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My luck streak has ended
Can't find the time to rhyme.
The meter is all off,
am i just speaking?
My poetry has gone downhill!

I try to hard.
My fate is determined
by sh*t poetry.
Eventually it will have to end,
get the hook
killed off
Dead.

------
*laura*


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The following comments are for "My Poetry Sucks"
by englishgal16

Sucking poetry...
My advice:

Read, read and read, anything that inspires you has inspired you or you think will inspire you.

Never force your writing as then the rhyming will be forced and trite.

Go back to your inspiration, live a little and then carry it back to the page.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )





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