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My insides want to
come out of
my protective body.
I, oh I hold
on to things so much.
Even the crap
i hold onto.
The crap.
Why the crap?

------
*laura*


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by englishgal16

retention

Thanks. I enjoyed reading this.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: April 23, 2005 )

you know, low-carb chocolate has a laxative effect...
Supposing we take the first 3 lines in context, it sounds like the speaker should be eating a lot of prunes. Thanks for the write, Laura.
-Casey

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )

Funny Crap
I'm not sure you meant this to be funny, but it is hilarious to me.*rolling on the the floor* This is way better than Leno. Do you have any more?

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )





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