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Im kinda bored just
sitting here can't
conentrate on studying
anymore endless lines
of sum41 and blink182
running through my
head can't decide if
im cold or just feeling
lonely even though i
know im not alone i
just need your company...


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The following comments are for "thoughts in a text message"
by englishgal16

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As I was writing the piece it came out as one long train of thought so when I was transfering it to i found it difficult how I wanted to organize it. First i had it in one, long, continous sentence, but that seemed boring so I broke it up as best I could. But thanks for the suggestion! I will use it in my future poetry. :)

( Posted by: englishgal16 [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )

sum times but

I'm usually a big fan of proper punctuation, grammar, and such- but not in this case. It's "TXT ier" the way it is.

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )

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