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As we kiss he gives me the Dark Gift
The blood trickles down my throat
Smiling with bliss as it excapes my flesh
While the moon frons upon us as one does when one gets fired
The earth below us has a seizure
The Heavens above us cry
Day turns black as night
Night turns light as day
The Dead come alive
The Alive die
All in my eye I learn the hidden history that died
He wispers in my ear You're the one to bind us, the one to rule us
And the fires of Hell rise into the Heavens
Heaven cries for the Queen has arisen


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The following comments are for "The Queen"
by forsakengurl

The Queen..
This reminded me of the Queen of the Damned, was that your inspiration?

It would have been nice to see some more original images in this piece, but it still has something.


( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: April 24, 2005 )

Yes I did mean frowns. What is flash fiction? And yess Queen of the Damned was my inspiration.


( Posted by: forsakengurl [Member] On: April 25, 2005 )

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