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Splish splash glump, sluuup. Crimson and Nexis's feet made the slushest sounds as they ran across the swapy terain of the dragon lands.

"Come on Sky you're it. And touch the ground for crying out loud." Crimson turned and put her hands on her hips.

"I still don't know what 'it' is." Sky yelled down.

Skyfox never touched the ground he always floated at least an inch above the ground. At the moment however he was as high as he could get while still maintaining audible accessability, he had remain at this high to avoid the firey wrath of the little thounderbolt standing below him. (In other he wanted to avoid a face full of mud). He wasn't a big fan of being dirty and it was understandable he being clad always in white light blue all the time. He was a slick looking sweety and liked to look his best.

Sky folded his arms and looked down excepectently.

"If you don't get down here i will make you a very unrecignizable 'it'." She started to bounce and wiggle, her tone took on that of a small child trying to convince her parents that shhe did in fact have to go to the bathroom. "I made those special pants for you and everything."

Sky looked down. Yes they were a nice pare of pants, white with light blue wind patterns. It didn't move like his pants. Something was slightly off putting about them though. He didn't mind the waste being a bit tighter, nore was it those funny pouch-like things she had sewn into the sides, it was the fact that that they stoped at the knees. True less cloth would get wet so he wouldn't get weighed down and he was a little more arrow dinamic never-the-less he was down right uncomfortable with his legs exposed.

Nexis walked over and started speaking in a low voice. Crimson listened and nodded her head in agreement, then she raised her voice so that Sky could hear.

"Nexis has just brought it to my attention that you must be a coward."

Sky's eyes went wide, "What?"

"Yeah, I bet you couldn't touch the ground if your life depended on it."

"Am i hearing what i think i'm hearing?"

"In fact i dare you to come down here and play."

"I'm not even trying to hear that little girl."

"Oh no?" The corners of her mouth turned to a wicked smile. "I guess i'll have to double dog dare you then."

Skyfox stared down at Crimson with his arms crossed just shacking his head. Crimson held his gaze with a smart ass know it all grin.

"Brat." Sky held his arms straight into the air and let himself fall. He hit thte ground so hard that he soaked both Nexis and Crimson. Their screams and giggles were uncontrolable as they raced through the marsh.

Sky was close. He was just about to get Crimson when nexis dove and grabed her by the ankle. She went down and Sky tripped over her sending him flying head first into the gooy ground.

In three seperate areas of the feild muddy bubbles came floating to the surface as each player exhaled in exsution. As if connected by one rope all three of the kit members sat up at the same time.

Sky reached out beeped Crimson on the nose and said "Tag you're it."

Crimson's eyes widened and she started throwing mud at Sky while he and Nexis made a run for it.

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