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Song in sun with pears

Tree’s hush brings awed gaze

Perched hawk earns respect


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California
Uber Alles


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The following comments are for "Haiku III"
by skulduggery

Skul's third...
Very interesting...Will return when time allows..

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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 20, 2005 )

Thank You Three
bobby7l: i look forward to your comment. thank you for reading.

demeter: i am anticipating another arrival today. it is a description of the same suburban piece of property as above. i hope you will enjoy it as much as you enjoyed this haiku.

jorgeluis: thank you very much. to have vision and to be able to share it is a gift. i am grateful. i hope that i can do it justice in the future.

( Posted by: skulduggery [Member] On: April 21, 2005 )





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