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At the end of all time
when states no longer exist
and islands are only a distant memory
adobo will remain a favorite
and we will live on.

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The following comments are for "The Prophecy"
by webguy

Future forecast
I have read sveral of your pieces and find you strange, but somehow, compelling.
This,adobo, the seasoning? Or is the reference to the artifacts left behind by ancients, or moderns, our homes?
You open deep channels in strange ways-

I enjoy! (I think-)

exists should be exist-, you probably caught that already

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 21, 2005 )

Very nice. Conjures up images.Good and bad. I think you are right.


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: April 23, 2005 )

Thanks guys... Adobo is actually both a method of cooking and a dish. It's an entire people's culture and traditions etched in taste. Not everybody likes it, but for those who do, it is something that I think will be the last to die

( Posted by: webguy [Member] On: May 20, 2005 )

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