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Hello,
I just want to say you’re guilty
For the nights I didn't slept well
For my crazy diets and bad headaches
For making me give up on my plans
For the classes I failed
Guilty for messing up my whole life
For making me listen to sad songs
For having shown me what longing is
For making me cry for no reason
Guilty for having become so necessary
For making me feel insecure
For making me want more
For making me be nothing without you
You’re so guilty and so innocent
And if I want to stay by your side
And be with you all the time
It’s because I love you
Oh, I love you…
I love you so much and so little
So little I need to be happy.
Can’t you see this is all you?

------
Pedro


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