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In you there is still hope
and too you
nothing is ugly
But instead
everything is beautiful
like the sky
The sky so vast
that as you lie upon the grass
you feel as though you could fall
fall into an endless blue
much like that of water
because water is like the sky
and when swimming upon it
it is though you can fly
fly into another world
beautiful and vibrant
Because that is your world
an endless world
in which you wish to conquer
and your country
scattered with plastic subjects
Who only think of you
is the strongest in the land
and as you lie in bed
forced against your will
you look towards tomorrow
Because tomorrow
will be beautiful
Just as it was today

Watch a falling comet,
Jump up and bop it.
Dance with a hobbit,
and leave me a comment.

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