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buying the first coffee
in a foreign land, winter

little man inside my head
whispers Kipling, being

burden to my own burden
a brown savage, devil

his knocks restrain
pre-utterance, ricochet

the I transgressed
gapes for meaning, language

signage triumphs fortuitously
invites pantomime, silence

mercy to shivered hands
incarnates momentary coffee, peace

warm transitory between gulps
emptied cup reveals, abyss

aroma of historicity grins
the little man laughs, remains

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