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Friends after midnight
A.M.ís intoxication
Laughing at nothing

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The following comments are for "Wet Toaster Hour"
by apathy's tears

Wet Toaster Hour
This touched a little closer to home than I'd like to admit. FLASHBACK!!!! It evoked a powerful feeling. One of familar longing and of relief that it is in the past.

( Posted by: josey [Member] On: June 26, 2002 )

this is a great haiku! Your use of the genre's constraints to evoke an entire scene comes off without a hitch. Keep them coming!

( Posted by: phylum sinter [Member] On: June 28, 2002 )

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Thanks all
Thank you all for the great comments I'm glad thgat you enjoyed the haiku. Any thing that I could work to improve my work? I'm open to suggestions...

( Posted by: apathy's tears [Member] On: June 28, 2002 )

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