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The beginning…
a Time beyond Time..
the Godhead...the One.
Nothingness …the utter stillness in the Void-
in total oneness with the One.

Then… the strands ..without number ,
fluttering through Nothingness
brushing past …
on a sudden , coalescing
into infinities of vast planes-
yet formless ,yet insubstantial -
surging ..and clashing ,
their furies unbounded .

Then Emptiness -so limitless,
stretches far past Infinity.
And Light –
the white hot incandescence-
blazes through Emptiness
forever raging against Darkness.
While Time – so relentless …so remorseless-
ticks ,as the aeons pass …

Creation unfolds
in all its complexity-
ever so wondrous …so mysterious..
so magical…yet,
so ineffably beautiful.
Far , far beyond the leap
of mortal ken.

…. But in one soaring flight,
the Veil stands pierced-
ripped to shreds -
as Icarus dares to brush past the Suns.

And Light –
in its very last incandescence
flares through vast Spaces.
Time stills forever .
Emptiness turns into Nothingness.
And Nothingness ,at last-
in one with The Godhead.


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The following comments are for "Beyond Titles.."

Beyond Titles
Yes..... I very much like your new piece "Beyond Titles. It is so wonderfully abstract (philosophical) while at the very same time you enabled me to see it all unfolding right there in front of my own eyes. I commend you on such a fine attempt to embrace such a wonderfully large idea.... not an easy thing to do.

And thanks for your appreciation of my piece "Pimp of the World." I agree with your thoughts on a few of the readers comments.

Keep up the good work!

As always... your friend,

( Posted by: dougsoderstrom [Member] On: April 16, 2005 )

Doug ..thank you
Dear Doug

Thank you very much for en extremely meaningful , precise and to the point appreciation of my work.

Look forward to reading more of your work which in my opinion speaks from the heart.

Your friend


( Posted by: RJKT [Member] On: April 16, 2005 )

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