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I use to stand here, alone
Now I have the one person to make me joyous
Without him I would not be the person I am
Without him I would not be happy

He saved me, saved me from everything
Caught me when I was falling, almost years ago
Let me know that life was not wreched
Told me that I always had someone to go to

I sit in these desks and wait
Wait for the time for me to live with him
Time for me to fly away from this wasteland
He taught me how to fly
And without him I would have fallen into the dark abyss

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