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I fear the end is comming

The clock begins to stop

The world faids befor my eyes

Each beat of my heart is fallowed by a jolt of paine

There is no reason fore me to continue

The world is full of caouse

And I fear the dreaded doom is tearing at my sole

With a final scream I reach the end

There is no more pain in my heart

No more agonie

Where once there was caouse now there is nothing

At last the majestic finsh is here


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