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It's like watching yourself
In a show on T.V
The words you are saying
Is that really me

It's taking over
I'm lost in it's world
Controlling my actions
And blamed on a girl

But she is forgotten
It helped me do that
In exchange for my life
As now I am trapped

Inprisoned it has me
Inside all alone
I try to get out
But I need to get stoned

I'm not what I was
With it I have changed
The devil is lurking
My hands have been chained

Some nights I escape it
I run in my dreams
But the more I resist it
The stronger it seems


------
Heart break and no fear


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The following comments are for "IT"
by SeanMicheals

Adiction?
This has a slightly desperate feeling of a personal loss of control and being misunderstood.

The one period you have seems a little lonely as far as punctuation goes. Looks good. -Philo

( Posted by: philo [Member] On: April 15, 2005 )

Philo
You could not be more right. I wrote this poem years back at probably the lowest point in my life. This poem for me was a Wake up call that I answered. Noone until now has ever read it.

( Posted by: SeanMicheals [Member] On: April 16, 2005 )





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