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Ronco Time Traveling Kit:
(How to use;)

1.) the still mind reflects
2.) while hands moving still
3.) the moments momentum
* ) arrival unfailing

Please Note:
What's good cleaves what's not.

Keep the good word.

The body is a season,
the mind, a timepiece
and the spirit, a cloud passing.

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The following comments are for "Carpe Per Diem"
by SaintEnvious

Seizing daze
I can't say I entirely understand this, but I find it fun, and thought provoking. I love the title, and your signature is as much fun as your poem!
Glad I stopped by.


( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 13, 2005 )

Tender Seizure
Your words are a shining sun.
My eyes are a closing smile,
and in my heart, I see you there,
for a moment, briefly passing.
I am in your gratitude,

( Posted by: SaintEnvious [Member] On: April 13, 2005 )

I feel raptured
Oh my oh my...

"My eyes are a closing smile"

... now that's a line to be reckoned with!

Smiles at ya, Saint-


( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: April 13, 2005 )

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