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chapter 1
Toni and Bella

Bella do you take Toni to be your lawful wedded wife? "I do," said Bella. "Toni do you take Bella to be your lawful wedded wife to have and to hold from this day forward as long as you both shall live?" "I do," said Toni. Bella takes Toni in her arms and they both kiss passionately. During the wedding Toni and Bella danced all night. "I'm so glad we got married," said Toni passionately. "I never thought that after three years of being together we would get married," said Bella. "Why do you say that?" Toni questioned. "Because I never thought that I would ever fall in love." Bella looked into Toni's eyes. "I love you baby!" "I love you too!" said Toni.
2 months later...2months into our marriage and it's already downhill. Bella and I work constantly all day and when we come home we never have sex, we always argue. Sometimes one of us will sleep in a different room. I just wish we could be like we use to, before we were married. Toni pulls up to the house and gets out of the car. She takes a deep breath before going inside. Toni walks to the door and opens it. Toni sees Bella in the kitchen cooking dinner. "Hey Honey!" Bella says happily. "Hey!" Toni says quietly. Toni I really think we should talk. "About what?" Toni looks at Bella with a sad face, looking like she is going to cry. "About us arguing Toni." Bella walks up to Toni and wraps her arms around her. “We need to talk about our problems instead of argue baby,” says Bella in a soft, sweet voice. “Bella you don’t think I know that?!” as Toni raises her voice. As Bella sighs and walks away Toni grabs her arm. “Wait I’m sorry baby, let’s talk about it please?” Bella looks at Toni and says, “I’m trying to but you get all mad.” Lets sit down then Toni says with a sad tone in her voice. They both sit down on the couch and sit face to face. “I want to know why we argue so much?” says Bella. “That’s all we ever do!” We haven’t had sex since our honeymoon; we never cuddle up on the couch and watch a movie. “All we do is argue and if we don’t do anything about it then we’ll end up getting a divorce and I don’t want that!” Bella says hysterically. “Then lets stop always arguing about the little things and talk about our problems, said Toni. “Ok”. Said Bella. They both kissed each other, at dinner, and went off to bed. The next morning Toni had waken up early to make Bella breakfast. After all she had to make up for all those times arguing with her and never fixing breakfast for her in bed. Bella meant everything to Toni and she had to prove to Bella that she was sorry. As Toni took the breakfast up to the bedroom she had noticed she was still naked and didn’t think to get dressed. “Oh Shit!” “I fucking forgot to get dressed!” said Toni. Bella started to wake up and saw the breakfast then saw Toni naked. With a surprise look on her face and a big grin Bella starts to laugh. “Did you fix breakfast naked?” said Bella. Toni starts to giggle. “I didn’t know I was naked until now!” They both laughed harder. Toni lies on the bed beside Bella and leans forward to kiss her. As they start making love Toni hears someone coming up the stairs. Bella moans loudly. “SHHHHHH!” “Someone is coming,” said Toni. Bella stops moaning and they both look at the door. The door opens and it’s two tall men staring at them. “God damn it Bryan and Justin I thought you were my fucking parents!” yelled Toni. “Oh yeah and your parents would actually come up here and barge in while you two are having sex?” said Justin. Bryan and Justin looked at each other and laughed. “Oh yeah and your parents would want to barge in and see two gay men have sex?” said Bella sarcastically. Bryan and Justin stopped laughing and then Toni and Bella laughed. “So are you guys going to let us get dressed or not?” said Bella. Fine then said Bryan. We’ll just take the breakfast so you lesbo’s can “make love.” Said Justin. Bella and Toni both laughed. Bryan and Justin took the breakfast and went downstairs.


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brandy


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ur a fine person and a fine writer
love the story love the writer lol cant waite for the rest of the book love. love yea lots g chat yea later.

( Posted by: ftmthasme [Member] On: April 12, 2005 )





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