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Take me away
To a place Iíve long forgotten
Take me away
To a place of lonely solitude
Take me away
To a place of peace and harmony
Take me way
I will not put up a fight
For you
Just take me away
Iím bored with this place
Today.


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T.A.O


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by ftmthasme

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hey syd i really like your poem and your story..its awesome...hope to talk to u soon.

( Posted by: lesbianwriter [Member] On: April 12, 2005 )





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