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You lay on the earth flailing helplessly
Quiet desperation....silent cries in the night
Drenched in pain and sorrow
Looking for your nest...your safe haven

I watch in shameful indiffernce
Not to feel your pain..your empty longing
Not to care for your plight
I look with blind eyes...not to see

You pain is my past
Willed to survive
And rise above the demise of others
Whom in their ignorance leave a genetic scar

You touch my soul
Through your innocence
Your pain will serve to guide you through
And struggle no more....

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The following comments are for "Fallen Sparrow"
by Indianna

Willed to Survive
Another beautiful song that you have written, and it has also touched my heart..I feel the same way about wounded creature's. This is grand! You have alot of passion in your heart.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 15, 2005 )

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