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One Day I looked at the World ARound me,
And All I saw were things I didnt want to see..
All I could think was " How did it get this far?"
And How can I change it all?

A World for all to see,
Of foolish dreams & childish Memories,
All I see,
But nothing I can do,
Yet All I Do is try,
Even you don't know Why.

I see a sky so very Blue,
I see the Life that's so untrue,
I want so much,
But I take much Less,
This World I see, I must Confess,
Is not what I want to be

A World for all to see,
Of foolish dreams & childish Memories,
All I see,
But nothing I can do,
Yet All I Do is try,
Even you don't know Why.

I'm the King of the World,
But with a World Like this,
What does that really mean?
A Place to Lie....
A Place to Die....
A Way to know what to do....
I wish I knew...




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The following comments are for "An unnamed Song I wrote."
by DJ Emerid

Point taken, Miss Jessica
I couldn't decide on a title....Any suggestions?

( Posted by: DJ Emerid [Member] On: June 26, 2002 )

BRILLIANCE!
All I see..
I LOVE IT!!!

( Posted by: DJ Emerid [Member] On: June 26, 2002 )





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