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You said it all happend too fast,
for us to handle.
And I deny emotion to the heart,
and watch it fall to the ground in tears.
I see the times where time seemed move too quickly,
and to end all too abrubtly.
I remember hearing your laugh,
that made these tears subside,
and emotion to

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