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a walk on the beach
a walk in the sands
a walk just to reach
your hand in my hand

the waves at our feet
the wind in our hair
the way that we greet
i know that you care

you are one of a kind
and that is a fact
i know you're just mine
and that takes me back

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The following comments are for "Desire"
by MortalAngel

Pretty
That's really pretty, short and it paints a wonderful image. I hope to read move from you.

( Posted by: kraziRenee [Member] On: June 16, 2007 )





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