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An organ went to eat
but starts to vomit
its produce hunt the ovum
that lasses reproduces

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The following comments are for "An organ"
by princeo

Sex?
I may be going on a limb here, but did I just read a metaphor for sexual intercourse and/or conception? Too lazy to look up ovum, but it sounds like it would be a part of the female reproductive system ;)

Might be way off base, too. Feel free to flog in public.

SD

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: April 21, 2005 )

The Incredible Edible Egg
Ovum = egg, droo baby.

I think dru is right. I think that the writing could be tweaked. I think that it's fun. I think it's cute. I think it's a quickie.

Lans

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: April 21, 2005 )





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