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O my tear…
I do escape thy shedding
Thou art treasure
That I hate to waste
Yet…
I long for thy falling
Thou wipe away pressure
That I rid in haste


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The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.


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The following comments are for "O my tear"
by fairgrace

Tears,
Nice little poem Fairgrace, timely for me reading this through watery eyes of my own.....

Nicely and neatly done.

Oh, one friend tells me, "more room in than out".. and I also KNOW it is STRENGTH to cry. And to all those who never cry, it is only another emotion, just like laughing,,,gee would you stop yourself from laughing ?? LOL.


Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 8, 2005 )

fairgrace: "tear"
fairgrace: Quite lovely. Nicely done...

Enjoyed,
B

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 8, 2005 )

Beautiful
Fairgrace;
It's been awhile, but I enjoyed this peice of work, that you so beautifully have written. Tears, {crying is good for the soul}

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: April 9, 2005 )

Tears
They wash away a lot of the old garbage so we can laugh again...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: April 9, 2005 )

Tears
Sweet, short, and brilliant. Tears, tears, tears, can you imagine what we'd without them?

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: April 11, 2005 )





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