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I haven't written a rant in a long time but here goes. This rant is about a lot of different things but mostly about how some people just never learn or forgive. The last time I had a real conversation with my Dad was probably sometime last summer before I ever ran away from home. But you know what the funny thing is after I ran away the only reason (in my opinion) that my Dad wanted me home was because my older sister had already run away and made them look like bad parents. But thats just it you see they're not bad parents they would be awesome if they would just give us a bit of freedom and trust. Now your probably thinking well you have to earn trust before you can have freedom but they never gave me the chance too. So I went and fucked it all up actually no I didn't they did they're the ones that won't even let me come visit my little sisters even though the agreed to it the called it off the day before. But thats enough about my disfunctual family becaus eyours is probably just as bad so I'll go on to another subject -- what about school everyone always bitches out there kids for not going to class or doing there homework when really whats the point? If you don't go to class then you get suspended and miss even more days so you don't pass anyways and you have to repeat the whole damn thing again. What the hell is wrong with our society when people can't even walk down a street or be themselves because their too scared? But are you ready for the all time stupidest thing we do? Why do we kill people who are killing people to show that killing people is wrong? What is the point whenever i think of that I just can't believe that we the people put war crazy people in power (This is my American half talkin right now) like George W. Bush who is just trying to please his daddy but is probably going to start WW3 the stupid fuck but yha I don't know how much of this made sense to you but I hope some of it did -PEACE

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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The following comments are for "All My Anger"
by twistymisty

Twisty,,,never stop asking questions...
If one never asks, how will they learn?

Anyways, lots of this did make sense to me. Good for you for ranting. It helps to talk, let things out anyway that you feel the need.
As a 47 year old woman I will tell you that life is quite complicated. I learned and saw many things I should never have by your age. It never tained me as I didn't let it.

Try to keep positive things with you as much as you can. Including people. It is easy to be hurt and easy to get angry. It is very easy to lose respect for many people including yourself. You may feel alone, abandoned and at times very hopeless. If you believe in yourself and learn that no matter what you are the most important person. Take care of yourself. In doing so though try not to do anyone else disrespect.

At your age you are responsible for your own actions, face the consequences of your actions, etc. Not trying to lecture you Twisty, I am sure you get plenty of that. Just be aware of YOU. Take care of YOU.

In the mean time keep on writing and if you feel the need rant, rant, rant. There will be someone willing to listen.....I would love to see your feelings of this rant in a poem....or write a story,,,,,,,would be nice to read.

Best wishes Twisty....keep your chin up, stay strong.

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: April 8, 2005 )

I certainly can't add anything to what Dareva has said other then the fact that you BOTH make a lot of sense.

Twisty, I'm not much of an advice giver but the fact that you're asking those sort of questions shows a maturity that other people sometimes never reach. I guess some people think they can decide for others and while they may have your best intentions at heart, it may not necessarily be what you want. Parents and teachers especially.

Dareva, have yiou ever thought of doing an agony aunt column?Your advice is very good.

Kia kaha

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: April 9, 2005 )

dear twistymisty,
hi. i just read your rant piece. sounds like you've got a whole lot on your plate. writing is a good way express your problems. it forces you to concentrate and focus.

i'm not offering any solutions to your problems, but let me offer this suggestion. make a copy of this piece and place it somewhere that it won't get lost. i have a feeling that if you read it a year from now, or better yet, five years from now, you be suprised how much has changed in your life.

will the changes be for better or worse? well, only time will tell. but don't forget, there's nothing we can do about the past, but we can do something about the future.

good luck,


( Posted by: johnjohndoe [Member] On: April 10, 2005 )

Yoi i thought u were the one dat called off the visit?????? Ne wayz u shold rite yhe poems u had in that glass jar when u still lived w/ us

( Posted by: pinup [Member] On: May 17, 2005 )


Went back to look through you work again and put the previous comment on an old post instead of this one..sorry.

I'm only a youngster of 59 but life doesn't change a lot... you just learn to be your own free spirit within it.

Keep writing... we can all learn from it,


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 17, 2005 )

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