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I smoke a joint
to cloud my mind
to give me peace
and have a good time
where's my life goin from here
I dunno so drink a beer
life is just so fucked up
I sit here smokin a butt
Like so many people I've been blessed to meet
Holy fuck life is cheap
You waste your time
You live you die
so toke like mad
hit the bong just like your dad
til you die and all is forgotten
then we'll dig you up and fuck you rotten

~~~dream as if you'll live as if you'll die today~~~

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by twistymisty

life sucks
and then you die, and then someone has the goddam insensitivity to dig you up just when you find peace. Hah! I should be so lucky. ;) I thought this was funny and sad too, tm. The last line made me chuckle.

( Posted by: Smithy [Member] On: April 10, 2005 )

I liked it! Twisted
I liked that! Everyone has felt that way before and if they haven't they are lieing! you rock twisted

( Posted by: flygirl1204 [Member] On: April 10, 2005 )

It's you..Twisty
Life's a Bitch and then you're dead,
But living life is in your head.
No matter what the others say,
It's you who chooses how to play.
Whether with a silver spoon,
Or earning pennies with a broom.
Whether parents understand,
Or think that you're 'one of the damned'.
It's you who lives within your head,
It's you you'll live with till you're dead.
It's 'you', the spirit shining through,
Not me, or them, it simply you!

Don't let the bastards grind you down!



( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: May 17, 2005 )

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