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Picture a baby
with noone around
A light in the distance
A treasure not found

Imagine a song
thats missing some words
and you know the feeling
of me without her

if youve seen a forest
where a tree stands alone
or stood in a house
when nobodies home

Drink from a bottle
thats empty and dry
and you've looked inside me
since she said goodbye

And picture a garden
Where nothing can grow
or stand by a river
where water cant flow

If you've ever seen darkness
or wanted to cry
then you know the feeling
without her in my life

If you've sat by a fire
and watched it burn out
when a car isn't starting
or a freind gets left out

A night with no stars
And wanting to hide
can both be imagined
But not felt inside

If you've ever had something
that you love to hold
picture it leavng
and then you will know



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Heart break and no fear


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