Like Viper I liked this one and I am pro-minimal poetry. I posted lots of very short poems here. This one's almost like a haiku, not sure if it could pass as a neohaiku, only Teflon could say.
I like poems about time, and this one could make me wander into a couple of meaning and more. Thanks for this one. :)
I agree with Viper9 you definitely put some thought into this poem in not so may words but its very expressive and though I donít like it I donít dislike it (SORRY ABOUT THAT FLAME)somewhere in-between but hey its your poetry right? Just commenting (DONT HATE ME) no Im just kiddind but it is very well written.