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Tiny Hands

Reaching into the past
Struggling to encompass the present
Groping for an undefined future

------
Keith


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by Dfortyseven

Nifty
I like this. It's difficult to say a lot with a few words, but this poem seems to be packed with possibilities. I just want to guess about it for a while.

And, yeah, there are people on this site who like collaborating. Me, for one. And Demeter.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: April 5, 2005 )

Tiny Hands
Like Viper I liked this one and I am pro-minimal poetry. I posted lots of very short poems here. This one's almost like a haiku, not sure if it could pass as a neohaiku, only Teflon could say.

I like poems about time, and this one could make me wander into a couple of meaning and more. Thanks for this one. :)

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: April 21, 2005 )

Tiny Hands
I agree with Viper9 you definitely put some thought into this poem in not so may words but its very expressive and though I donít like it I donít dislike it (SORRY ABOUT THAT FLAME)somewhere in-between but hey its your poetry right? Just commenting (DONT HATE ME) no Im just kiddind but it is very well written.

( Posted by: Aranis32 [Member] On: May 1, 2005 )

"Breathless"
1)You're busy. You have lives to live.
2)Someone thinks that if I ignore it, it will go away.
3)I know about the rules concerning the integrity of this site. Do you want it gone?

( Posted by: keith1123 [Member] On: May 18, 2005 )





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