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This is for you
the only one to break me.
To twist and contort my words.

Flaunting the infidelity,
holding unfelt words above shattered lips.
Letting the misunderstood seep into every part of me.

An unloved, over nurtured,
Persisting promise
That will follow me in suggestion.

Overwhelmed, saturated with a sense of disgust.
filthy from oblivious words
That pierce fragile cracked lips.




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