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Images glimpsed
Silvery framed relief
He stares into me



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The following comments are for "reflections"
by apathy's tears

Haiku Fun
As far as Haiku's go, this is a damn good one. It's short and sweet, but it still carries a lot of meaning.

Very well done.

Richard

( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: June 24, 2002 )


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pleasant surprise
Thanks for the kind words. Needless to say I'm surprised to get rated this high on my first post. Here's to hoping that my future work lives up.

( Posted by: Apathy's tears [Member] On: June 25, 2002 )


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thank you
Thanks Jessica for the comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed this piece. I really didn't think that my stuff would be as well recieved as it has been. Hopefully I will manage to maintain the streak. Thanks again!

( Posted by: Apathy's tears [Member] On: June 28, 2002 )

another good poem
Let me be the first to say that I find it refreshing that you respond to the comments on your work, and I think you have composed very good examples of the lost art of Haiku.

( Posted by: the Co.konspirator [Member] On: July 7, 2002 )


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Once again
Thanks Co.konspirator for your very kind words. I'm glad that you've enjoyed my work. There are more on the way so keep an eye out.

( Posted by: Apathy's tears [Member] On: July 8, 2002 )





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